Another Revision

 Hi Everyone!

This week I had my peers give feedback on one of my blog posts, and I had to rewrite my blog post based on the feedback I got to create a better post. I found this week's blog to be quite difficult as the feedback was very positive and I honestly didn't know what to rewrite or what to do as I was happy with the post already. It took me a bit more time than I expected but I did end up rewriting it successfully and I'm even more happy with how it turned out in the end.

I read an article that really helped me rewrite my blog. In the article what really helped me was when I looked at the relevance and importance of the content that was in the feedback. I realised that I needed to give more factual information and less of waffling about unnecessary information in my blogs. I also thought about the things I could have included and why I didn't include them. Where I was going with my sentences in some areas and if they were clear to the audience and not just me.

These were just some of the questions I asked myself after reading the article as even though the feedback was helpful for me in the future and gave me better tips I still found it very difficult to rewrite my blog post until I read a few articles which made it more clear about what I should do with the feedback I get back from my peers.

That's all for now, Bye Everyone!

sources:

Writing a paper: Revision

Making the most of Feedback

Academic Phrasebank



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